2009年5月26日 星期二

Karen's Weight-loss Tips

Karen want to weight-loss,beacause she is so heavy.
Since she want to it,she jogging everymoring. she is
so hard-working and she not eats fastfood.It is so hard
for her,but she not thinks get up,everytime,she is a strong
girl, never cry and afraid.
Now,she don't drinks cokes and eats fries.
She want!she loss 30 kg,now she is a beautiful girl,
everyone love her much,she is so happy and have
more boyfirends,she have a good life

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  1. Hello,
    1. Karen want to weight-loss,beacause she is so heavy.
    → Karen wants to lose weight because she is fat.
    2. Since she want to it,she jogging
    everymoring.
    → She wants to make it, so she goes jogging
    every morning.
    3. she is so hard-working and she not eats fastfood.
    → She decides to keep away from fast food.
    4. It is so hard for her,
    → But, it is difficult for her.
    5. she don't drinks cokes and eats fries.
    → she doesn't drink any coke or eat fries.
    6. She want!she loss 30 kg,
    → She wants to lose thirty kilograms.
    7. now she is a beautiful girl, everyone love her much,
    → Now, she is a beautiful girl, and is popular with everyone.
    8. ,she is so happy and have
    more boyfirends,she have a good life
    → She is so happy that she has many boyfriends and a wonderful life.

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